Monday, June 26, 2006

I Finally Entered

I posted my story today on Jason's blog. Get ready to check it out when he puts it up later today. I'll update when he does.

*** Update ***

Here it is!

12 comments:

Kathleen said...

Well done, Scott. A little autobiographical fantasy?

Scott said...

There is a grain of truth to it. But in real life, I would have broken my fist had I tried it. In real life I kept my mouth shut, and there wasn't a hot chick in the passenger seat, but a good ole boy making cracks that pissed me off worse than dad.

What you aren't picking up on, and what nobody will for that matter, is that Jonah is the same guy from my Damned Carnival story. I thought I would explore his past a little.

mr. schprock said...

Hey, Scott, just read it and loved it. I left my comments on Jason's site. Nice work!

Bailey Stewart said...

I'll be sure to check it out at some point today. Having a bit of a problem with mom today, so blogging is hit and miss.

Kathleen said...

Actually, I had remembered that Jonah was the assassin's name and figured this was a little bit to add to his character. I liked it.

Scott said...

Kat - Cool, I'm glad you figured that one out!

Mr. Schprock - I saw the comments. Totally appreciated. I haven't seen yours come up yet, but I will definitely show my support when it does. Good stuff back at you buddy.

Bailey - I hope your mom is doing ok. I know it has been getting tougher lately.

Writing Blind said...

Wow, this is really good, I especially liked the last line.
"Steel-grey eyes of the conqueror bore down on her." Gives me chills.

jason evans said...

Thanks for all of the amazing support, Scott!

Flood said...

It's really great to watch you get better with each effort.

Great story.

Scott said...

Rebecca-I'm glad you liked the ending. Thanks for giving it a read!

Jason - You earned it. I'm giving nothing here.

Flood - Wow. Thanks a lot for that.

Toni Anderson said...

Nice writing. Clarity and pace and nice imagery.

That old love and hate with the smoking thing :)

Shesawriter said...

I loved it. I said as much on Jason's blog. Good job!!!